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A Contemplation on Gun Violence in Verse

The following poems are by DaraMonifah Cooper, concerning the tragic fatal shooting of 15-year-old Tre’Vante Etienne Friday afternoon at a Savan playground on St. Thomas.

“The sound of gunshots often wake me at night while asleep in my Solberg home overlooking town and on the other side of the hill from the West, but hearing those from Savan Friday in broad daylight while I was already awake immediately reignited concerns, feelings, thoughts, and hopes that I know are much bigger than my immediate ability to help the way I’d like,” Cooper wrote in an email.

In response, she offers these two poems, with the second “more specific to Friday’s tragedy.”

The Constant Scissors that Cut the Night

6 more bullets

in our atmosphere

at the strike of 5 a.m.

wondering did anyone else hear

Each one, like a lash through the night

on the backs of slaves

might one, two or three

lead another to their graves

for every bullet counted

like an automatic mechanism

of an old warehouse that is haunted

genocidal realities

like a slap in your face

waking us up every morning

as if we need to be reminded in this place

that this paradise of ours

is nothing more than their playground

it is the land that was/is bought, sold and cherished

as we sing, swing, climb, fly, fall, run and play around

may the wisdom of the ages capture us

and might acid rains wash away our lack of insight

as we open up our eyes

to the constant scissors that cuts the night

— DaraMonifah Cooper

“Just sick and tired of hearing gunshots this early in the morning. WAKE UP my PEOPLE! WAKE UP!!!,” Cooper wrote.

“Yes, we definitely have a broken village crisis in the Virgin Islands, but we don’t make guns here. ‘If I had a Dollar’ is my offering to our thoughts towards the gun violence in the Virgin Islands community. Shared originally at the Rock Lounge Open Mic event in April 2011, I resurfaced it in order to keep us thinking and working towards actual soulutions through dissecting the real root of the problems,” she continued.

“It was written as a raw, yet creatively indirect, emotional response to gun violence and trauma in the community, along with sibling poem, ‘The Constant Scissors that Cuts the Night,’ the poem uses a devastating ‘if I had a dollar’ metaphor to highlight the tragic losses felt locally and the unasked questions that would point fingers away from simply the gun users, their parents and community, but who brings them in … and who allows it,” said Cooper, explaining the submission below.

If I had a Dollar: The Poem by DaraMonifah

If I had a dollar for every bullet punctured
I’d be filthy rich

with the blood, pain, confusion and hatred of my own.

people

what are we waiting on?
who are we waiting for?

BOOM!
Another youth gone
to the rage of metal and skin and bone colliding

with one swift movement
never erasable

for the fearful:
unlikely untraceable

so run…

run like the wind knows your secret

fly…

fly like the birds camouflage you into the clouds

hide…

hide in the scare of your own daily stare
the suspicion of your greeting response
the thoughtless cycle of your motionless presence

if I had a dollar for every bullet shot
I’d be a gun pusher

I lay in bed eyes wide open

wondering
knowing
fearing
eyes tearing

quietly

sharing my thoughts with the spirits in the air….

Hearing,

‘”Who watches the docks at night?”‘

— DaraMonifah Cooper

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